My workshop was a definite help in revising my essay, and making sure I stayed on point with the message I was trying to get across. In my shitty draft, I provided allot about the different time periods social interactions and how it has changed through social media, but I forgot to mention my own perception of how I interacted.  Through the workshop, my two peers helped me add in my own input on my essay, giving it a clear main idea. After going to through the workshop, my essay is definitely enhanced and ready to start being written.